Monday, January 8, 2007

The Haunted House - Part Five

Here, at last, is the final segment in the 5 part series "The Haunted House" by Aaron Job


Yikes! Yelled Chet. He was so scared. He fell over.

As soon as he touched the ground, a smell sprayed out of a bottle in the back of the backpack.
It was strong in the air.

The smell was so strog, it made the ghost disapier.

The boys were heroes. Everybody was safe.

Thay saw that it was perfume that had made the smell.

Thancks to the perfume nothing was left of the haunted house.

THE END

4 comments:

ThirstyDavid said...

Whew! That was a great story! The suspense was hard to take!

iamchief said...

Welcome David! How did you hear about us?

ThirstyDavid said...

I came by way of your blog.

This is a great idea. Aaron Job is a talented young man.

By the way, his hit counter doesn't account for all traffic. I read most of this through my RSS reader.

Amanda said...

Great Story Aaron Job!! It was so good and I am so proud of your very first story!

Love, De Da