Monday, January 8, 2007

The Haunted House - Part Four

Continuing in our 5 part series of installments of "The Haunted House", by Aaron Job...

Suddenly Zac heard a noise.

OO - OO - OO - OO.

AAAAAAH! He cried! It was the ghost!

Hey! Chet Nick! Help! He yelled.

Oh, uh, Zac! We'r, uh, glad your back.

Look behind me! Zac said.

AAAAAAAAAH! All four shouted.

To be continued (last time, I promise)...

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Oh man!! How can you leave us hanging like that??

I can't wait to find out what happens. You have a very good use of pauses to stress the intensity of your characters.

I really like Zac's eyes when he sees the ghost for the first time. You really do a good job on the details!!